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Nick3306

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zombieravemaster
« on: July 14, 2012, 09:04:24 pm »
Ingame name: zombieravemaster

Join date: June 18 2011

List your creations, and the worlds they are on: builder12- white fortress
                                                                 builder13- cathedral
                                                                 builder14- jet plane
                                                                 builder15- Colosseum
                                                                 builder16- AK47 assault rifle, travel plane
                                                                 builder17- Lamborghini
Links to screenshots of the creation: cathedral http://i46.tinypic.com/xdinfc.jpg
                                                  AK47 http://i48.tinypic.com/25r10lx.jpg
                                                  colloseum http://i45.tinypic.com/2aabllw.jpg
                                                  white fortress http://i50.tinypic.com/2isjo00.jpg
                                                  travel plane http://i47.tinypic.com/vuwrc.jpg
                                                  jet plane http://i48.tinypic.com/15wl349.jpg
                                                  lamborghini http://i48.tinypic.com/2e50bjr.jpg

Extra (Anything else you want to mention): i didn't use /deafen because i would automatically disconnect :(
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Re: zombieravemaster
« Reply #1 on: July 16, 2012, 07:37:30 pm »
ok i'll just give my opinion about them all
cathedral:
has good detail on the outside (not much) and not so much detail on the inside.
AK47
is good.
colloseum
he has the shapes right buuut he doesnt have the right kind of detail (it looks plain and it's not realistic on the area of where the gladiators come from, where the spectators come from)
white fortress
looks good.
travel plane
looks good on the outside but the inside has not much detail (can't expect him to have much room, but he can do better)
jet plane
i have ZERO experience with fighter jets and know nothing about them soo it might be wierd that i say this but imo it's too flat
lamborghini
looks great (though i know nothing of cars)

rating(1 is crafter level imo)
cathedral - 1/2
AK47 - 1
colloseum - 1/2
white fortress - 1 1/2
travel plane - 3/4
jet plane - 1/2
lamborghini - 2

as you can see i'm somewhere between yes and no... soo for now, as i'm not sure, it's a no ;)


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Re: zombieravemaster
« Reply #2 on: July 17, 2012, 11:07:39 am »
my opinion, yes, I'm a critic:

Cathedral: Inside could use a lot more work, the walls are bland and straight. The outside didn't look too bad at first, until I noticed roof on the back. It is just flat and looks unfinished.

AK47: Looks good, would have been nice if there were something like an inside, where you could see the bullets, but overall good build. Suspect this is from a model though, looking at the level of the design in this one compared to his other work.

Colosseum: Top row is not finished for no apparent reason at all, also the inside is entirely empty.

White fortress: Circles are... no circles, unless intended, it's not that good.

Travel plane: Aren't these supposed to be round? Also, again, the inside could use more detail. The stair to the roof of the plane... da fuq?

Jet plane: Again, details. The design is totally bland and far too flat for a jet. Also the cockpit area is just empty.

Lamborghini: To be honest, I'm kinda disappointed about this one. Of course the outside looks great, but, this was 100% definitely made from a model. And when you exclude the design and just look at the details he added himself there are some flaws. For example lights, mirrors, engine, doors. All basic parts of a car, and, on this scale definitely possible, so, required.


In short, the builds are not bad, but they need just that little more detail to make it enough. I'd say no for now but don't let him make another build, just let him improve on the current ones.

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