Builder Application - Kurdman899

[kurdman899]

Ingame name: Kurdman899
Join date: May 25, 2012
Briefly describe all your creations:
Jorrvaskr: Building from the game Skyrim; home of The Companions.
Dragon: A simple Chinese wall, with a hill, forest, hut, house, farm, and of course an epic dragon.
Biomes: This is a building consisting of 4 biomes: desert, jungle, plain/forest, and snow. Inside each biome is a small hut/house.
Japanese: This build I sued to get recruit therefore I'm not sure if it counts towards this application. However, it is a Japanese house surrounded with cherry blossoms, a pond, and an arch.
What world/s are the creations on:
Jorrvaskr: Recruit 3 at my home jorrvaskr
Dragon: Recruit 2 at my home dragon
Biomes: Recruit 3 at my home biomes
Japanese: Guest 2 at my home japanese
Links to screenshots of the creation:
Jorrvaskr: http://imgur.com/a/uoavJ
Dragon: http://imgur.com/a/QEODo
Biomes: http://imgur.com/a/4EJtC
Japanese: http://imgur.com/a/fYHvz
Names of players who helped contribute: Fireball4801,Super497
Extra (Anything else you want to mention): Thank you for your time to take time to look at my application.

[Xeadin]

You have some neat builds, but unfortunately some of them lack in fine interior detail-- most notably, Jorrvaskr. You have the first level of the building, but what about the space above the fire pit?

Also, I would've found your Dragon build a lot more impressive if it was all hand-built by you alone. Remember that building quality is significantly increased when you have more than one person actively contributing on the same project. A few blocks here and there is fine, but it looks like a fair amount of the dragon was a collaboration between you and FIREBALL4801.

Ultimately, I feel you could've done a much better job with some of your builds in terms of size-- especially the Biomes build. While nice and oriental, it seems very small, very condensed and extremely limiting in terms of how much detail and/or ideas could've been put into it.

Rejected. You have some room for improvement, but the trail has already been set out for you. You have adequate exterior detail, and you seem to have a knack for organic sculptures. Work on those weak points outlined above, and I'm sure you'll be well on your way on the next application