--Builder - Gurjot0

[Gurjot0]

Yo Gurjot0 here with a Builder App
And before you guys say anything I purposely put links in for the Quality of the pictures.

Ingame name:
Gurjot0

Join date:
I joined Opticraft on I'm not really sure I think a month ago ?

Forums: Same as join date.

Briefly describe all your creations:
Well i made 1 Mansion (2 Stories)

I Built a really big building 5stories.

I built toads head

I built toad

I built pickachu

I built a pyramid with a maze inside

3 Stories house.

I made Ps3 myself

I made a soccer field.

I helped out on the Dance Disco Thing with Akos, Themadman300, Grand_Chill, and a few other people I can't remember the names of.

I made a castle with a walkway to the castle and water surrounding the castle

I made Baby Luigi by myself too.

Ok I'm FINALLY done my fighter jet phewph solo too Skyscraper too

What worlds are the creations on:

/J Guest Is the 1 Mansion (2Stories)

/J Guest is the Another HUGE building with a glasstower walkway 3 Stories

Worldofrecruits is the fighterjet and skyscraper,

/J Recruit is the Stadium made with a few people

/J Recruit is the "I made a castle with a walkway to the castle and water surrounding the castle"

/J Recruit is the Pyramid

/J Recruit is the Soccer Field

/J Recruit is Baby Luigi

/J Recruit is the Really big 5story building

/J recruit2 is toad its head and pickachu

/J recruit11 is the Ps3

Links to screenshots of the creation:

Castle:

http://i54.tinypic.com/2h36f6w.jpg
http://i52.tinypic.com/mrx05c.png
http://i54.tinypic.com/r8wbwm.png
http://i52.tinypic.com/2uqkw87.png

Stadium:

http://i55.tinypic.com/a31gs8.png

Pyramid:

http://i52.tinypic.com/dfaauu.png

It has a maze inside too:

http://i56.tinypic.com/zlt2m1.png

Soccer Field:

http://i51.tinypic.com/rva4hf.png
http://i56.tinypic.com/if2zgj.png

Two mansions:

Someone Griefed this one and plagerised my idea while i was asleep and built exactly my mansion but erased a few stuff, Xeadin knows how it looks like though so ask him

http://i56.tinypic.com/15oa2xe.png

Pickachu, toads head, toad and Baby Luigi:

I built these in the REALLY OLD TIMES so don't believe anyone who claims its theirs.

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/38/pikachun.png/
http://i51.tinypic.com/2ppbmmh.png
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/834/smalltoad.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/717/toadt.png/

5Story building

Overall Look:
http://i53.tinypic.com/15cg66c.png

Family Room with Library inside:
http://i53.tinypic.com/ap8feq.png

Library:
http://i56.tinypic.com/9vgr37.png

A bar, with a tv on the side and sofas:
http://i55.tinypic.com/e7o2dw.png

A bunk bed with a big pool and more stuff added inside:
http://i53.tinypic.com/2jbl2tc.png

A lava sofa with a Elevator inside and HI in green:
http://i56.tinypic.com/2qkks3q.png

Algebra class:
http://i55.tinypic.com/6dyicn.png

Disco Dance room with 2 Elevators and a disco sofa:
http://i53.tinypic.com/2vnqbo6.png

A garden with a water slide:
http://i51.tinypic.com/2n6ybms.png

Hallways:
http://i52.tinypic.com/6fp76c.png

A big sofa with a wonderful view just to sit and relax :p:
http://i52.tinypic.com/169hrgz.png

The rooftop a unique one too :p:
http://i52.tinypic.com/30dik8y.png

A water elevator to take you through all of the floors:
http://i52.tinypic.com/dpk7qc.png

Tv inside with water elevator:
http://i53.tinypic.com/28ulfuf.png

Two lava sofas with beer on tables:
http://i54.tinypic.com/2ugcscn.png

And the walkway to the lava elevator going all the way back to the starting!:
http://i56.tinypic.com/a4r390.png

Fighter jet:

I built this in the REALLY OLD TIMES so don't believe anyone who claims its theirs.

http://img84.imageshack.us/g/javaw2011032917422195.png/

Skyscraper:

CONTENT not shown, if need to be seen pm me, you need a OP+ rank.

Ps3:

http://i54.tinypic.com/r8e0y0.png
http://i54.tinypic.com/2d8ma2q.png
http://i55.tinypic.com/vyxi01.png
http://i55.tinypic.com/jtxesl.png

And for the other 3
story mansion someone destroyed it and kept my water i put there, you can ask Tod or whatever that ops name is that i built one and he saw it, it was BIGGG

Names of players who helped contribute:
Everything myself but..

Akos, TheMadman300, Grand_Chill for Disco Dance, And Matt only built half of the walls on the 3rd floor outside walls. (Very little help Matt)(5 story building) And for the forgotten thing one friend i forgot his name though

What is your current rank in Opticraft ?:
Recruit

Extra (Anything else you want to mention):
Yes, I'm going to try this app one more time for builder, worked my !@#$ off for these creations :|. Took me about 20hours ingame to create the skyscraper.

Do you agree with our terms(http://www.opticraft.net/index.php?topic=3.0) ?:
Yes

[Mr_Mr_Mr]

You're one of the good recruits out there, but not the very best, no support, sorry also, try adding different stuff to the application, I've seen you re-applying with the same stuff.

[Gurjot0]

You're one of the good recruits out there, but not the very best, no support, sorry also, try adding different stuff to the application, I've seen you re-applying with the same stuff.

I worked so hard man, and i got to show all my creations omg... :| so stressed now :l

i added 2 new things

[Xeadin]

Now this is more like it It is just a tad shameful that the skyscraper doesn't really have much in it, but you do take advantage of some other areas as well. Internal detail may not be your strongest point, but it is still present.

As mr_mr said, you are one of the good recruits, and your effort thus far plainly shows that (I had to put in my all making the last build before getting Builder, so I can definitely relate)

Anyway... I am putting you On Trial. If you can work on sprucing up a couple of your existing builds in 5 days, I will be a happy camper (mainly your skyscraper)

If you don't make it in the trial period, don't panic. You may have a chance to redeem yourself on your next app submission

I am giving you a lot of time for this, so USE IT WISELY

[Gurjot0]

Now this is more like it It is just a tad shameful that the skyscraper doesn't really have much in it, but you do take advantage of some other areas as well. Internal detail may not be your strongest point, but it is still present.

As mr_mr said, you are one of the good recruits, and your effort thus far plainly shows that (I had to put in my all making the last build before getting Builder, so I can definitely relate)

Anyway... I am putting you On Trial. If you can work on sprucing up a couple of your existing builds in 5 days, I will be a happy camper (mainly your skyscraper)

If you don't make it in the trial period, don't panic. You may have a chance to redeem yourself on your next app submission

I am giving you a lot of time for this, so USE IT WISELY

so should i make more buildings? Perhaps a giant pool arena ?

[Xeadin]

You can do that too, but I highly suggest you make your previous builds look just a little nicer-- clean up a bit, add some more detail where detail is needed

Victory is in your grasp!

[Gurjot0]

You can do that too, but I highly suggest you make your previous builds look just a little nicer-- clean up a bit, add some more detail where detail is needed

Victory is in your grasp!

So is trial over man i had to go

[grand_chill]

You can do that too, but I highly suggest you make your previous builds look just a little nicer-- clean up a bit, add some more detail where detail is needed

Victory is in your grasp!

So is trial over man i had to go

I believe that it hasnt been 5 days yet Gurjot. Keep building 

[Xeadin]

If you post your pic of your PS3 on here, I will see if you pass or if you still need to keep going.

You have 4 days left on your trial

[Gurjot0]

If you post your pic of your PS3 on here, I will see if you pass or if you still need to keep going.

You have 4 days left on your trial

KK uploaded.

[Xeadin]

Good, good. Even though you might not receive some nice letters from minecraftgirl, you will be receiving a nice present when you come back

Accepted. You keep your Builder rank