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[Builder] - Victor1261
« on: August 07, 2011, 07:46:26 pm »
Title:Victor

Ingame name:Victor1261
Join date:(Where I live) July 26, 2011
Briefly describe all your creations:I made a epic face, a crapy house, a super tall house with a bunch of floors, a
floating house in the sky with 3 floors and furniture, a Castle with 3 floors cannons a water elevator complete with
floor numbers a staircase too many bedrooms to count a library a pool on 3 floors bathrooms a conference room windows
(our styled) and a roof with a flag, a (HALO) Warthog,and a sky mansion with a water elevator 4 bedrooms a living room
with a fireplace a dining room bathrooms a roof pool a roof tennis court roof basketball court and more add-ons, a
passenger space shuttle, a huge sign pointing to my 2 creations, and numerous other items.
What worlds are the creations on:Guest, Member6, Guest163, recruit, builder
Links to screenshots of the creation:  http://imageshack.us/g/35/myhouse7.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/g/825/nyancat2t.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/g/855/footballstadium.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/g/33/washroom.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/g/827/satillite4.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/g/841/missile4.jpg/

http://imageshack.us/g/823/ghost4.jpg/


Names of players who helped contribute:Mishatasic, zureas
What is your current rank in Opticraft ?:Recruit
Extra (Anything else you want to mention):I was on trial builder before so I could build in builder.
I dont have much time to apply again cause i have to go to a camp for 10 days soon but I will post anything else
I make before I leave for camp.(new HALO Banshee AND Wraith)
Note to Xeadin: I cant add any more to the washroom since im not
builder anymore and the observatory is in builder.
Do you agree with our terms(http://www.opticraft.net/index.php?topic=3.0) ?:I Do.

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Re: [Builder] - Victor1261
« Reply #1 on: August 07, 2011, 08:55:47 pm »
It would be better if all pictures were on one site.

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Re: [Builder] - Victor1261
« Reply #2 on: August 07, 2011, 09:52:04 pm »
Relja, they are all on one sight but each picture has a different link. Most image hosting sites are like that.

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Re: [Builder] - Victor1261
« Reply #3 on: August 07, 2011, 10:40:50 pm »
Meh. Could be improved.. But who am i to judge.

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Re: [Builder] - Victor1261
« Reply #4 on: August 08, 2011, 03:13:12 am »
As Turtleman had said on your  last submission, you are building too fast, which is consequentially strangling out the quality we look for in builder applications. A lot of small builds is fine, but you need to take the time to make something with good quality. Don't rush... it will only curse you rather than help you. If you can't finish something one night, continue on the next and repeat that process if necessary ;)

That's what I had to do when I built my large waterport structure for my builder application. Small builds is only a small piece of the bigger picture. Use those small builds to create a larger, culminating project-- utilizing your building skills to design something unique and spontaneous.

Rejected, but you are in the right direction
« Last Edit: August 08, 2011, 03:16:14 am by Xeadin »

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Re: [Builder] - Victor1261
« Reply #5 on: August 08, 2011, 03:25:21 am »
heres a suggestion, make a city with all your small things
sorry about the lock