This is an interesting take on the Builder application template, but it's missing one key item (
or items if you will): Screenshots
What is it that you have built in the server that would amaze us or would show us your building experience at this point? We can't make any judgements on a blank slate. If you aren't sure how to take screenshots, you may take a look at
this thread for further assistance
Rejected, but I love the way how you created your application based on the template.
You may try again when you have the screenshots posted. Also, if this helps, you might have to wait at a minimum of 3 days before you can create a builder application after you have gotten the recruit rank so that you have as much time as you need to create stuff that we can base our judgements off of. Take a look at some of the Builder worlds and accepted builder applications to get an idea of what we'd like to see
Good luck, and
Be Creative