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Title: [Builder] Malcolm19988
Post by: Malcolm19988 on February 05, 2011, 03:25:46 am

ingame name:malcolm19988

join date: jan 15

structures:
chrysler building
buissness building
skate board
pale (or bucket)
space shuttle
minecraft default player
mario mushroom
light saber
vac. home
castle 3 floors
cathedral

photos:
chrysler building:
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n611/Malcolm19988/Chryslerbuilding.png
buissness building:
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n611/Malcolm19988/buisnessbuilding.png
skate board:
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n611/Malcolm19988/skateboard.png
pale (or bucket)
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n611/Malcolm19988/Pale.png
space shuttle:
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n611/Malcolm19988/rocketship.png
minecraft default player:
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n611/Malcolm19988/minecraftplayer.png
mario mushroom:
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n611/Malcolm19988/Mariomushroom.png
light saber:
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n611/Malcolm19988/lightsaber.png
vac. home:
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n611/Malcolm19988/VACATIONHOME.png
castle:
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n611/Malcolm19988/castle.png
cathedral:
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n611/Malcolm19988/cathedral.png

Names  of players who helped contribute:none

What is your current rank in Opticraft ?: Recruit
Extra (Anything else you want to mention):i am a good builder personally and i have time to get better and build awesome things besides some school. i take lots of pride in my work and i feel that i can do better each time i build this is the 5th one hopefully the last...Thank you for your time.



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Title: Re: [Builder] Malcolm19988
Post by: Darkmayrise1 on February 05, 2011, 03:27:42 am

I like it alot

Title: Re: [Builder] Malcolm19988
Post by: Rufarin. on February 05, 2011, 04:08:11 am

 The exterior on your buildings are great but bland.
Your light-saber and your skateboard are....
And everything else is bland.
The one thing that that stood out is the vacation home.
Wish we could see some interior pics.

Anyways, you need to work on your style of building.
Maybe try some sprite work?
And you need to add more color to your buildings.
We're looking for eye-popping buildings here.
I'm sorry but you've been rejected.

Title: Re: [Builder] Malcolm19988
Post by: Rufarin. on February 05, 2011, 04:09:11 am

And it might help If you look at some older builder aps.
Maybe mine? :
GL with getting builder(no sarcasm).