Opticraft Community
Discussion forum => Legacy => Archives => General Discussion => Topic started by: Mattkkk12345 on October 31, 2013, 08:57:57 pm
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Hey Guys, it's Mattkkk12345 here and recently i've been working on a promotional video for opticraft.
It is a video including players builds and actions too the song "Get Lucky" - By Daft Punk.
This is the first 2 minutes of the video as the rest is in progress, would be very grateful if you guys could take a look and tell me what you think, any criticisms, compliments or improvements please reply on YouTube or on this thread.
Youtube Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HZOqmxd8Zzw
Please Note: Full Video Will Be Coming Shortly
Thank's Guys
- Mattkkk12345 :)
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Can't just upload any song lol.... Its called copyright
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i got a creative commons licence, and the only country it's banned in is germany, apart from that Youtube says their okay with it...
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Do you mean teaser instead of taster?
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Like it so far :)
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No a taster, but i can change to teaser. I would say a taster of that, just a different context of putting things. Just watch
the vid :P
ALSO THANKS GOGAR :D
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Loving it, keep going..
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My eyes are bleeding.
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Awesome so far. You should show my house at /home adam_suttle.
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You should show off our good builds instead of wandering around the wilderness with Captain America. Instead of the music, you should get some audio from Opti or Nick explaining the purpose of the server and what makes us unique, such as the community that is older than SMP itself, and the custom server mods that aren't available anywhere else.
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To add on to what Luminaeus said, you shouldn't wander around in the wilderness doing nothing, show snapshots of what you can do in SMP like make a shop, mine, explore with friends, and showcase some builds. I also think you should have less distracting, overwhelming music.
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To add on to what Luminaeus said, you shouldn't wander around in the wilderness doing nothing, show snapshots of what you can do in SMP like make a shop, mine, explore with friends, and showcase some builds. I also think you should have less distracting, overwhelming music.
its quite nice and I can't tell some works put into it but yeah. Do what's above:)
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You should show off our good builds instead of wandering around the wilderness with Captain America.
Agreed about this. Also, I'd suggest asking a mod who can fly to get some good footage, and some good video editing.
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My place is in it, therefore its awesome ^_^
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My place is in it, therefore its awesome ^_^
-.- alright, "its awesome ^_^" lol
You should show off our good builds instead of wandering around the wilderness with Captain America.
Agreed about this. Also, I'd suggest asking a mod who can fly to get some good footage, and some good video editing.
:)
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Nice video and good editing.
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Thanks for your feedback guys, I have taken it into consideration and will hopefully focus on builds for the remainder of the video, but I will be keeping the song tough :P
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It's funny how dani is just like standing on the tree :P
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It's funny how dani is just like standing on the tree :P
Hell yeah! ^_^
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Well guys, thanks for the compliments and things I can improve on, I have taken them into consideration and edited some of the video. From now on in the video I will try and get more footage of builds and perhaps get footage from /fly from a willing mod although this may be complicated. I have chosen to keep the song as the footage already made fits with the song.
Thanks Guys
- Mattkkk12345 :)
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Oh btw Matt, so far so good!
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My brother has a bear that he calls "Fluffy".
He likes to say "Were up all night to get fluffy"
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Here's a critique of it:
It looks very amateur, the song, the transitions, the clips. The song: It doesn't really fit the video, it seems like you just slapped on some song that was on your hard drive perhaps you can find something that fits better. The transitions between clips: they seem random and they just pop to another clip, there is no blend or order it seems. The clips: It just looks like you're walking around following a person play the game, instead give examples of what opticraft is, that doesn't necessarily mean go around and look at all the buildings, show them the experience they'd get it they were to be on opticraft. For example, show them the market, examples of how staff are great here, or examples of how the community is great.
I know you can't fly, but you can build platforms to stand on to get birds eye views.
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I know you can't fly, but you can build platforms to stand on to get birds eye views.
That is very true lol!
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My eyes are bleeding.
My eyes and ears are bleeding...
Here's a critique of it:
It looks very amateur, the song, the transitions, the clips. The song: It doesn't really fit the video, it seems like you just slapped on some song that was on your hard drive perhaps you can find something that fits better. The transitions between clips: they seem random and they just pop to another clip, there is no blend or order it seems. The clips: It just looks like you're walking around following a person play the game, instead give examples of what opticraft is, that doesn't necessarily mean go around and look at all the buildings, show them the experience they'd get it they were to be on opticraft. For example, show them the market, examples of how staff are great here, or examples of how the community is great.
I know you can't fly, but you can build platforms to stand on to get birds eye views.
Heres a tip Matt: Good recording, but change the video content and add a different song, maybe something minecrafty
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Here's a critique of it:
It looks very amateur, the song, the transitions, the clips. The song: It doesn't really fit the video, it seems like you just slapped on some song that was on your hard drive perhaps you can find something that fits better. The transitions between clips: they seem random and they just pop to another clip, there is no blend or order it seems. The clips: It just looks like you're walking around following a person play the game, instead give examples of what opticraft is, that doesn't necessarily mean go around and look at all the buildings, show them the experience they'd get it they were to be on opticraft. For example, show them the market, examples of how staff are great here, or examples of how the community is great.
I know you can't fly, but you can build platforms to stand on to get birds eye views.
Absolutely agree! You read my mind :)
Also, your video graphic options aren't maximalized. The small render distance annoys me, just like the fast trees, fast grass etc. It might be me, because I am used to playing with the best settings and a HD texture pack.
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xD, sorry freekkiller, my laptop is very very bad and could your reccomend a texture pack that i could use, cause at the moment i just use faithful, any ideas on a new texturepack to use for videos?
Thanks
- Matt
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Very nice, very nice. I loved it!!! If you do another video, feel free to explore Hogwarts and /home frogsrock12 hogwarts
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Guys he isn't going to change the song, look at his profile, he's obviously obsessed with it.
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adding to woodens point, I can't be bothered to change the timings of all the footage with a new song ^_^
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So it isn't in progress anymore?
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Awesome keep it up! Nice work
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It is still Igen, yes